The Opposite Was True

the fewtch

Smells of smoke
as electric we
can live
again

The problem is that
we are too
verynice people

next:

Time, buddy.

Reviews

[.]

Sometimes nice isnot what someone wants at that stage in their life.

[Corset]

sometimes being very nice people can be a bad thing, when it hurts you to be nice, and that can happen, I wonder about this one, it makes me wonder what two very nice people could or would do if they were a little less nice next time.

[The Twin Arenas]

Yeah, this is one of the weirdest things I've wrote, I think. Based on phones, mainly. And niceness. Disconnections through overreaching kindness. You got it.

[Benita Paloja]

Nicely put together I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!

[Olivia]

At first I though verynice was a new word that I didn't know, lol
Amazing piece

[B]

I never felt that way about anyone
Never
not once

[The Twin Arenas]

you're lucky. thanks for the read.

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

Maybe in the next life, buddy!

[Ana B.]

Very original and though full :) Even smoke has different sources.....

[Cory Barrett]

Cooking end up pretty bland when nobody want to start a fire.

[The Twin Arenas]

bah, this was lazy shite. I hate reading good ideas executed poorly. this is that.

[Cory Barrett]

i have a f**k ton of those

[Ruth]

Interesting! Lines maybe not to be crossed...intriguing piece...

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Very experimental writing. :) Rudi