The Climber On The Wall, Out Of Movements He Can Use To Keep Climbing, Falls.

The fewtch.

I hope as my stomach

itches his head

the children aren't poisoned

after eating porkchops

made while a woman was out.

The parsley processed

with the wire.

Reviews

[Bill O. Writes]

Just got back on this site and have been scouring through old read requests, admittedly removing most.

However this title caught me, not because of the length though. Was this by chance inspired by a Dungeons and Dragons session? lol

[Davidgeo]

Um... what the hell are you talking about?

[The Twin Arenas]

Why did you even bother writing?

[The Twin Arenas]

That's your response to reading something. "Umm what the hell are you talking about?" If it's too tough for you, or if you think that poetry has to "be about" something, do yourself a favour and stay away from my stuff. You'll only get hurt.

[Davidgeo]

Yes. That is my response.

[Davidgeo]

… still waiting to "get hurt" as you said. (empty threats are for d*********s)

[emmajoy]

Read three times, first from start, then from finish plus, a quick scan highlighting the inbetween.. and still afraid to accept the fact: things happen. Reads like a bewildering but somewhat catastrophic cleverly Escher drawing - apparently going somewhere but - left hanging! Perhaps.

[The Twin Arenas]

I wanted to create the sense of standing in front of a sink full of stagnant greasy water. I don't know. I don't hate it. Corners were painted, which is always my aim. Thanks for the read, M.

[emmajoy]

Have always tried to accept the various views reviewers find when reading my attempts at minor scribbles - stress minor. We see- feel differently, put our imagination feet into someone else' s creative shoes, sometimes almost there, other times, anything but. Yours post is puzzling but an Interesting read. I tried!.

[The Twin Arenas]

I've always felt that this site should change the word "reviews" to "replies."

[emmajoy]

As long as its accompanied by a 'thank you for sharing' or similar, it doesn't really matter, does it!