The sad truth.

The road is long and the night is cold,
walking along and listening to the song,
that is vibrating in my heart - remain strong.

Ignore the consequences, think for the chances.
Diving in my own mind, knowing that is half blind.
Each try eventually goes for a next goodbye.
-Chris

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like the deep emotion in this. I like the ending... matches the title.

[Wadeon]

Agree with you and thank you!

[Singer-Songwriter - Miy..]

I think it should be "THE next goodbye" instead of "a next goodbye".
I am not so sure but I hope this helps!
I love your poetry!

[Wadeon]

Thank you for your advice!

[Singer-Songwriter - Miya]

;-)

[justjenn_2u]

I wish I could say this ended bittersweet but somehow, I still feel it will. Your emotional outlet when you utilize emotive words drew my heart in and I left with a feeling in my core.

[Wadeon]

Thank you. =)

[justjenn_2u]

Please review Her Silence Speaks if you have time ;