A Dawning Realization

A realization lost with time

Shiver from a passing truth

Frown for fickle minds

Lips shape thoughts

Without conviction

Tangled

Fleeting

Lost

Author's Note

Thanks so much for reading - please leave your thoughts.

Reviews

[Jasmine Thousand]

I thought of those refrigerator magnets when I read this, and how they sometimes form odd nonsensical sentences. It seems almost like an allusion to how we say things without really thinking them through: half formed ideas and lies that combine to form our daily conversation, slowly and surely degrading into a simple sentence.

A thoughtful piece. :) It's been some time since I've read anything of yours, and it's definitely gotten better.

[Skye]

I've learned a lot. It's true what they say, practice makes perfect :) Thanks so much for your review.

[Lozzie]

Wow... there is a thick sense of detachment within this poem :) a marvellous read :)

[Skye]

Thank you!

[Christoph]

For something that feels like it was written in a moment you may have felt resigned, this is very strong and sure.

[Skye]

Thank you for reviewing :)