Witching Hour

Through the house, 

both up and down, 

you hear the floor 

boards creak and 

midnight voices 

mutter. 

You can't see 

them with your 

eyes, as if you'd 

even bother, but

they'll see you 

and they'll walk 

close, lean in, 

cheek to cheek, 

and 

you'll shudder. 

Reviews

[Gabriel]

Nice little poem. Short and to the point, but sometimes one has to be. I really like it!

[Skye]

Thank you :)

[RuseInex]

i happen to believe this concept/reality and yes, imaginatively, just the thought makes me shudder even more as i consider previous experiences looking out my twilight window . .. makes me shudder now

[.]

-- eerie... but also cute... -- love the way your words flow... :)

[Skye]

Thank you! :)

[.]

-- you're welcome... :)

[Chris]

shudder?

Reminded of Halloween displays and attraction moments

[Skye]

Yes, shudder. Thank you for pointing it out! And thank you for your review :)

[Chris]

Was a fun read...