Shine

Be proud of you

Our essence is completely us,

Our spirit and our mind.

Defining who we truly are,

Without a stream of consciousness

So when the chance arises

For your essence to be known

Shine bright and radiant 

Proud of who you've become

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

Absolutely wonderful Skye! It reminds me of a story someone once told me about how you live your dash. It was about a man who went to the funeral of a good friend. He talked about how he remembered when he was born and will never forget his death, but what he wanted to talk about more than anything was the dash between those times.

[Skye]

It sounds like it would have been very sentimental. Thank you for your reveiw. :)

[Amna M.]

Beautiful! Short and simple, but very meaningful! Keep it up.

[Skye]

Thank you, I will. :)

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Quite sagacious! I have some trouble with this.

[The Analog Kid]

Short but words of wisdom. Very effective.

[Deadly Nightshade]

It's not long but I like it too! The last two lines I like the best. Cool writing.

[STAR CHILD]

oh this tells alot in so few words i like it