Caged

just a poem

When you are cornered and hurt

With noway to turn or fight

When you are caged and torn

Between whats right and wrong

When you've cried all you tears

And fought all you can

When noone is there to listen

And there is noone to care

Remember all you're worth

And do all you can

Till you can escape

And prove them all wrong

Author's Note

just tell me what you think

Reviews

[Light and ashes]

This is amazing. It holds such a voice of encouragment and hope.

[Skye]

Thank you so much :)

[Light and ashes]

Your welcome :)

[Nath]

Good poem, great message. It's important to never give up when you want to get somewhere, to fight for what you need and prove that more is possible than the average skeptic believes to be. Wonderfully written!

[Skye]

Thank you :)

[Nath]

You're welcome :-)

[Forever Hidden]

I'm pretty sure all birds can relate to this, along with me! You inspire me in some of my poems, that's why I have more poems than books!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you go to my writing because there is a surprise waiting for you!

[Skye]

Of course, honey. :)

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

I can relate to this poem all to well. Splendid!

[Mockingbird]

this is a very empowering poem. we have to remember that we have to prove it to ourselves that we can overcome the difficulties.

[Otsana]

I agree with Mehul it is an encouraging poem and it is relatable because I think everyone has come across a situation where they have been alone and had to decide whether they are going to give up or "prove them all wrong". Good job!

[Mehul Rwat]

It's nice little encouraging poem. It even has a nice moral. Liked it.