Escaping Tourment

I hope you enjoy reading it.

 

 

You thought I was broken

That I was yours to keep

Never rebelling

Always acquiescing

You love wasn't true

It was the purest hate

Of corse, you didn't know that

To you, it's all the same

Yet somehow I saw through it

Before it was to late

Though not before

I shattered

By my will, I escaped

By my strenght, I survived

I'm no longer yours to keep

Even if I'm broken

Face it,

Give up,

You have nothing left

You're all on your own

'Till God see's it unfit

 

Author's Note

I really hope you enjoy it and take the time to comment. I love writing, so I love when people tell me what they think! Thanks for taking the time to read!

Reviews

[Orthrus]

Its very defiant with well placed words and strategically placed breaks that add nice emphasis to the right parts.

[closed..acct]

very powerful write, nicely done!

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

As gorgeous as all your writings. It may not be my favorite, but I did thoroughly enjoy reading it.

[Lina Grey]

Powerful write. There were some typos, but that happens, right? The piece was very strong, and inspirational. Very well-written. Thank you.