Long Distances

 

Swollen eyes and

Tear-filled sheets

Great me with each passing day

With one last kiss

I took my leave

My love I gave you

To keep in your heart

I know you're there

Deep in the shadows

Still this pain is

To much to bear

My dearest love

When I see you again

It will be

By Heaven's fine pearly gates

 

Author's Note

Hope you liked it, as always, I enjoyed writing it, even if it only took me five minutes. Please feel free to leave me a reveiw and read the rest of my works. Thanks so much for reading!

Reviews

[darkness*star1985]

beautiful written, deep and so very sad " when i see you again it will be by Heaven's fine pearly gates......... truely moving.. good work keep it up and i will continue to read you writing

[Skye]

That should be my motivation right there then. :) Thanks for the reveiw.

[Pritesh]

Great feeling of 'close yet so far'.Your emotions turned sensible way towards the inner chords of hearts.I like the conclusive line about the reunion of love in pearly heaven.Keep writing.:-)

[Skye]

:) I appreciate it!

[Michael X]

A sad and tragic love that represents devotion to its highest degree,
artful and passionately expressed, formulated and beautifully done

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

Gorgeous! I still LOVE your free verse! Incredible!

[MOON]

Emotional lovely write

[MR_BREAZE]

Good one Skye

[Tasha]

This is beautiful, great imagery.

[just is]

I really enjoyed this write, this is wonderful