Butterfly

haiku?

 

 

Flitting in the breeze

a whispered sacred promise

Elegantly pure

Author's Note

I don't write haikus usually, so this is my first one-excluding 5th grade when I had to write one about a flower. Usually, I leave the haikus up to my friend Aeternal Oceanfire, but I thought I might take a stab at it. Tell me what you think! And thanks for reading, and of course any reviews!

Reviews

[Forever Hidden]

Little words, but a lot of meaning! If you know what I mean!

[Androglossia]

I'm not very good at doing haiku either but when I read this I was able to visualize a purple butterfly flying in the meadow. So this must be excellent!

[Skye]

Thanks :)

[zainul]

You have depicted the butterfly so elegantly in this lovely haiku.
Love it.

[Skye]

Thank you for your kind reveiw. ^_^

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
I will read your other poems too.
But gradually.

[Skye]

That is much appreciated. :)

[♥ Kinnixk]

Beautifully written. A lot better than what I could come up with xD

[Renée]

Very Pretty !

[icaros13]

Excellent haiku. Beautifully worded, with nature in the first line and hidden symbolism throughout. Good job.

[MR_BREAZE]

Better than I could have done.

[Lina Grey]

Told by thine meek quill
A tale of lucid beauty
Shared for all to read.

Yeah, mine's not that great, but your's is. It's inspiring and, as Lorry puts it, elegantly beautiful. Fitting for a butterfly. Thank you.

[Distant horizons]

Elegantly beautiful.