Where does this stop?

I'd love to hear what you think this is about, honestly.

Kiss this under-skin staining
Go on
Suck the bruises out.
Like leaves in a gale I
Shiver
When you touch me
Please don't crush me
Please don't punch me
But oh
Jesus,
How many pleases?
How many late-night teases
And f***s for apology?
I got a flame for you -
It f****n' burns
But so darn pretty...

I think that you can LOVE still
As you continue to hit me and
Kiss the under-skin staining.

Reviews

[MH]

"Kiss this under-skin staining
Go on
Suck the bruises out."
Thats art. I love that string of words.

[Rebekah Smith]

There's nothing better than a review of your words...except from a positive one! Thank you