It's like...

Just thoughts.

Like a lake, longing for the ocean
My heart wants to beat into the sky
But again, just like the lake,
It cannot cross the divide.

Reviews

[MH]

I feel this so hard.
I dont know if you wrote it thinking the same way i did when i read it but nevertheless i feel it.

[PoeticSorcery]

I agree with paul, it deserves just a few more lines, to really bring it home

[Paul Bell]

Like this bittersweet write. Would like to see more verses added to it.

[Rebekah Smith]

Thank you; I feel the same way, just waiting for the phrasing that will truly do this justice