Beautiful and cruel world.

Poem about the beautiful and ugly things I see

As I dance through life,thousands of beautiful and ugly things I see. Mothers giving birth to beautiful babies and children growing into smart adults. Places growing and expanding like  wild fires. People stealing and going to jail. People losing their lives over silly things. while I dance through life I feel the love and hate of the world. This beautiful and cruel world still feels like the right place to be. Love and hate is what makes the world go around. Without love and hate Noone would be who we are today. So for this I thank you beautiful and cruel world.

Reviews

[Rye]

I can see your point in this, life is what it is, we just live it the way it goes.

[Dave]

A very interesting philosophy. I like the way you offset the good with the bad and vice-versa. It's so much better, I think, not to just see the bad in the world and to be realistic enough to see that it isn't all good. I think it's a very thoughtful piece of writing. Hmmmm and you're only 16?

[Wannabewriter16]

Thank you. When I first created this account I was 16. I'm now almost 19. I just never edited my account.

[Dave]

Almost 19!! Oh my, to be able to turn back the clock.
Take care - Dave

[Wannabewriter16]

I still belive it's rare that people my age see things the way that I do. Most aren't even sure of what they're going to do when they get out of bed.