Three words and a glass of wine

A young girl oblivious to the world around her learns to forgive the four letters that hurt her

An empty breeze fills her heart

Mercy and depression engraved on her face

Is love intangible as the Gods we know?

Her soul replaced by an unmarked tomb

Why is love associated with the heart and never the mind?

Is the ever pumping blood vessel as important as we make it?

Deeply hurt by time

Betrayed by four letters

Her damaged lips as fractured as the land she stands on

A blade of light pierces through her Earth work, illuminating hope

Her sculptured pain slowly degrades

An immortal life re-emerged, a soul without pain

Author's Note

I would like to apologize in advance for any grammatical errors, honest thoughts are highly appriciated

Reviews

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

when I first read this I was thinking the four letter was "hate" instead of "love" and I guess that is derived by my own negative feelings toward love especially since today is Valentine's Day"

Love this lines........

Her soul replaced by an unmarked tomb
Her sculptured pain slowly degrades


a nicely written poem that asks the right amount of questions while searching for the answers

[Warren Daniel II]

My feeling towards the day are mutual, I thought I should try and write a poem and what better day to write a poem then on Valentines day. Thank you for reviewing my work . I tried to keep it short as possible.

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

Don't worry about the length, focus on the completeness of the message....nothing else matters.

[Warren Daniel II]

So, you would rather prefer a short poem with content, rather then a very long poem with no message?

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

For some reason I can't see your entire so based on the lines I can see here is my response.... The length or the amount of words don't lend to it's strength unless the message is delivered and received, than the purpose to which it is intended is best served

[Jerome F Knox III pseudonym Nefarious J. Dorsey]

When it is believed, conceived and perceived......

[Warren Daniel II]

Hmmm... Makes sense, thanks again for the review

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful thoughts in the poem. You took the reader on a journey to something that cannot be understood.
"Deeply hurt by time
Betrayed by four letters "
Many good songs about the four letter word. I did like the ending. We do re-emerged. Wiser and more careful if we are lucky. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. You open the door to thoughts and a long conversation.
Coyote

[Warren Daniel II]

Your honest thoughts mean so much, this was my very first poem and to get such a review is just what I needed to get started on the next poem. Thank you for your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Your good words gave me reason to rebirth a old poem. You are welcome.

[Jamestown]

When love is not love it can and will be painful, great piece! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!