Fountain Of Destiny

The Goddess of love's secret

Sunlight seeps through the cracks
Her soul forever silhouetted
Her tears disperse into the abyss
And re-emerge as the stars we know
As our hearts collide, a whisper of her name escapes my very lips

A million souls rejuvenated by her aura, and bow down in her presence,I remember a time when love used to love her. The Goddess of love remains mute to my requests, I'm unhinged beneath her spell once she manifests her woe

I long to sculpt my love upon her innocence
And for her love to intertwine eternally within my veins. I believed we possessed forever, when our souls interlinked. A night of shooting stars as I stare into her constellation I dare not blink

She maybe impaled to the Earth, bleeding drops of purity. Only with her, my face would be petrified as I welcome her magnificent purge onto me. As we flirt back and forth, oh yes I'm forever tempted to unmask her Godly beauty

Her damaged roots reject her endorphins
Poisoned is her photosynthesis the bringer of all light and the genesis of all which is pure.
Purgatory is what has become from the once pure garden of eden, So begins the search for the fountain of destiny.

Warren Daniel II

Author's Note

I would like to apologize in advance for any grammatical errors, honest thoughts are highly appriciated. Hope you enjoy the poem.

Reviews

[Jennifer Shaw]

So descriptive! It accurately captures and enchantingly displays the dark and magnificent essence of a beautiful, damaged woman and the way she is perceived by the one who loves her. It spoke to me on a deeply personal level. It was a privilege to read this.

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it :)

[Jennifer Shaw]

You're quite welcome. =]

[Kgorometja]

In all honesty I am yet to understand this poem, but I keep coming back just to be inspired. I'll get there, one of these days I'll get it

[BLACKBEARD]

fire emoji bru!
Keep up the hard work.

[Zac]

You have written a very great poem here.

[Larq]

This piece is gorgeous---rich with imagery. I just keep re-reading the 1st and 3rd stanza. This piece is filled with so much light, energy, and desire. Beautiful.

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much, your honest opinion is highly appreciated stanza 3 and 4 are my favorite :)

[Ruth]

This is absolutely delightful to read! So vibrant and visual, amazing depth! :)

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for giving my work a look, it really means a lot :)

[Daisy]

nice poem............ great job writing this.........

[Valentine]

A very deep and commanding write. Valentine

[Mary Bradley]

Well written and good imagery ... love gives us beauty and horror too sometime

[Ana B.]

A very original piece my friend. Love every line, especially the second one....perfect. Beautiful work :)

[Warren Daniel II]

Thank you so much for giving it a look, your thoughts are appreciated :)