I'm Still Watching TV

Let me hold you in my arms real tight
where every thing is all right

I still miss when we were running in the sand
and jumping in the deep blue sea.

Them was the good old days.
You know me I'm still watching TV

We're just losing by three
We're on the ten yard line
Last quarter, it's OK

But I want to know
Why did you leave me in the dark

Please baby come back
Cause I ain't nothing without you

Tell me where you are
Where I can come and get you.

You know me I'm still watching TV

Reviews

[Phil & Bren's Colla..]

Great job. Wonderful.

[Emily B]

Good job! These words made me smile a little.

[An Ordinary Woman]

This is great! I think it is fan-tab-ulous you write poetry ... AND you write it so well !!

Great Job!

[Sqeaver]

Good write. Cute

[Chem]

The poem was good.

But here's what's weird. I'm listening to music while I'm reading through stories.
Your poem came up "I'm Still Watching TV", and the guy on the some said "I"m Still Watching You" right when I read it.

Ok, so that was kind of random, but there it is.

[Jessica L Auster]

Good write. I like the theme of lost love here, and how you connected it to sports. Nice job.

[Brenda Sue]

I am so proud of you. You did a great job with this. I can't wait to read more of your writings. Lots of love, Aunt Brenda