My Dear

Again we have failed
Under the circumstances
We were never right

Reviews

[Ashley Campbell]

There are at least three different things this poem could be about. It takes talent, in my opinion, to be able to do something like that. It probably wasn't intentional; but knowing you it was. I liked it nonetheless.

~
Silver Wolf

[Kara Emily Krantz]

Perhaps a bit of punctuation? I never was into doing it, but i found sometimes it can make my haikus more powerful.

for example:

Again we have failed;
Under the circumstances,
We were never right.


You see what I mean? If not, that's cool... lol just trying to be reviewer-like.

Regardless, I like how you say so much in three lines - that's the tricky part, and i think you got it!

hugs