Third Block

As time moves in fives
We sit and wonder about
Our empty stomachs

Reviews

[Ashley Campbell]

I love this! it's so out of character and seems to be written off of pure boredom. I'm so use to the elegance being there and this one...it's nice. I've always felt it was fun/funny to throw off readers sometimes with spontaneous randomness...which it seems like it is. Anyway, another nice Haiku.

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Silver Wolf