Mistaken Identity

I can't help but stare
At her lovely long pink hair
Oh wait, that's a guy

Reviews

[Cara]

I love this!!! I can count the times I've been in that spot of OMG, dude, nice hair... :o)

[Ashley Campbell]

See what I mean about spontaneousness? The last line is very VERY unexpected. I can ust picture you sitting there writing this...it made me laugh. Nice work.

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Silver Wolf

[Nicholas Hallows]

Well I wasn't expecting that! This actually made me lol. Nice haiku. NH