When I dream

I am gonna try romance here.....

When I lay in this empty bed

I beg for your embrace

My heart is aching in my chest

This lonely bed

When I dream

Your hand is in mine

Holding me in the most sincere passion

I want to stay in this state of mind

When the sun breaks through

I awake to your smell

Yet your nowhere to be found

When I dream your here

I want to stay asleep

For there you will be with me

Author's Note

Yeah my first attempt...

Reviews

[Arrow]

Wonderful work. This really warms my day.

[мalғy]

Thank you very much :) it was my real first attempt at something romantic and passion filled

[ron]

OMG this is so beautiful.
My heart sighs and longs for this each and every day and night. I breath this in and exhale all the words you have written.

[мalғy]

Woah! I really appreciate this review Ron, I never thought my writing could be takenin that way!!

[ron]

You are most welcome Tay. You are very good :)

[Mary Bosworth]

Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it

[мalғy]

Thank you very much :)