The World Full of Sorrow

Nevertheless it's not hopeless for us...

The world is so cruel,
People so helpless...
There's no one to fuel our hearts,
It's so careless...
 
Fates are so chainful,
Even though we have lust...
Ardour's so painful,
Because we have no trust!
 
Streets feel like nightmare,
When I walk down the road...
I long to fight with
One's not kissing the rod...
 
"Where are we going?"
I just can't hold my scream!
Can't take this phoney
Land, that is deemed!
 
My Lord, just hear me!
I pray for their lifes!
Please answer my feelings,
Don't let them to dice...
 
And maybe someday
This world full of sorrow
Will meet one clear,
Deceptionless morning...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

There's a lot of despair in the lines and a clear intent on how to resolve the problems in the verse...