Secret

My secret, it walks out on me...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Secret

 

 

 

I'm not even sure what

Kind of prose this will be

 

But I write what I sense

And I write it for me

   

I will sit and I will tell

What my symptoms are

And you could be my well

Like all white sheets are

 

 

This secret of mine is

Something you can relate to

In misery or in bliss

 

 

This secret of mine is complex

Something out of the blue

I've been perplexed. Vexed.

It's damn true

You could be next

 

 

My secret walks out on me

Right to the ataba (steps) of your door

My secret it gives in and up on me

It tells the world about my core

 

  

The sky is smudged with the clouds of noon

 

And snowdrop flowers they bloom too soon

 

You can always find stanzas for the moon

 

I think about it all amidst the desert dunes

 

 

Beauty for the eye is a moment that ends

Loiters in your mind then passes like the winds

 

Like ripples of smoke

From a tobacco roll

 

Like a dewdrop that soaks

Into the sunrise call

 

Beauty does not cure

A history of scars

You'd somehow endured

But, hey, look at the stars

 

Not for hope, I meant.

Or for prose of compliment

 

But for the twinkle in its track

A light in an eternity of black

 

I live to find out what He'd made me for

But that's not just my case

 

I see it in the crimson lace

Of every war.

 

Author's Note

Comments and reviews are appreciated.

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Reviews

[bluessadmood]

These are like ramblings ,thoughts that come to mind
but really intriguing and very deep and witty
beauty surly is just a moment like a wind
but what is there else to look for..i think thats what we always
do ,beauty we seek in everything..just like your thoughts
so scattered ,my reply is diverse too ,but i agree to most that you said
i really enjoyed this,really dont know why..its kind of hit my thoughts too
lovely write..

[ForTheWorld]

it's beautiful, i love the rhyming, actually it's beautiful, it's very beautiful and lovely...i love also the feeling i felt in this poem =D

[Deviant Works]

Such obvious talent in every single word. Gosh, Wella, you just got the flow sweetie. A wonderful poem.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Your words are deep as usual, love it, "And you could be my well

Like all white sheets are" I love that two liners for some reason, it holds a deep meaning for me...thanks for letting me reading this hun.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

this is a great poem

[Marie Harrison]

I love the fantasy feel of this poem. It has great mystery this poem. Lovely.90

[Elle M.]

Love it!!! very well written for sure.

[PaperHearts]

Intriguing! This had such a lyrical, flowing quality to it, and I thought that your choice of words were absolutely beautiful. The stanza starting with the line 'The sky is smudged with the clouds of noon' was a particular favourite of mine, along with the couplet at the very end of the poem. A captivating concept. Well-written,
~PaperHearts