The Trick of the Pole

 

shouldn't drink should think

before blowing money

on blow

women will love you if you pay them

but when the money's gone

so is their love

 

the dancers dance

on poles as your

enthralling eyes consume

the girl that shakes her hips

like the hand that said goodbye

Author's Note

Don't fall down the rabbit hole~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Create real life situation. I agree. Dancers dance for cash. Not love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Stephen]

Good stuff! You are so right. Thanks for sharing!

[Haley Wilson]

Money truly is a powerful tool in today's society. Great representation!

[Mayank]

Money does all the trick, maybe, money cannot buy you happiness but aren't you comfortable sitting on nice chair, sipping some good wine. And, when you have money girls fly on you like winds.
The question about love is really tricky, because nobody love you when you don't have penny. Maybe, drink moderately and spend wisely.

[cloakedone]

this poem is so true.i commend you.

[Alex]

Thank you for your kind review!

[cloakedone]

nothing to it

[Saddam]

Absolutely but not for all.
It was a fabulous write and I love its mean...
Great write dear.

[Alex]

Thank you!

[wordman]

a great writ,it worked out well

[Alex]

Thank you!

[wordman]

ou are welcome

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Salutary write and a lesson for all. Money does not buy happiness merely rapid relief!

[Alex]

Thank you very much for the review John!

[ANTO]

A salutory lesson in learning to control the libido and knowing when you aint all that - when its the money thats all that.
The oldest trick in the book updated its inventory with a shiny new pole to capture fools who are easily parted with their cash.
Cool writing !

[Alex]

Yes exactly! It was inspired by all of the pervs walking out of massage parlours at 10am haha. Im glad you got the essence of the writing- its very rewarding. Thanks for the review Anto!

[ANTO]

Its truly coincidental but a guy I know - well his son came back from a weekend long stag party and confessed to his girl that he had had a lap dance and now their wedding is off !!
Oh you're very welcome by the way for the review ;)

[Alex]

Oh s**t!! Poor guy- but I guess he wasn't forced to have a naked woman on him! Hopefully he has learnt his lesson haha!

[ANTO]

He's scrambling like crazy to get her back. I don't know if she will take him back though. Its touch and go for this relationship. Obviously - he should have got permission before he went ;)