This Field Is Required

this is fictional. MY father was a great man.

His fathers arms were long ropes

That whipped him every night.

Penetrating deep within his skin.

The scars

On his back

Would not stop bleeding

The son tried to defend himself

But he was too young, too weak and too depressed.

He could do nothing.

The End

Reviews

[Allycat]

This is very sad, and it's sad to know that some parents do abuse their kids. Emotional write, excellent job!

[Emily B]

there were other scars, too, some that would never heal, and no matter how old, there is always too weak and too depressed

the end

[eglantine]

This def evokes sadness, but you def can take this further. I've read your stuff before and know you have the abilities:)

[Whales]

yea I know I could of but i wanted it to be short. I know why but i can't explain it...just jump into my brain and find out. i have the "Egiantine To Sam's Brain 9000" ready for you.

[Alex]

This was really deep and kind of depression. Very powerful though!