A Uke And Small Dinners

WATQUTZIE

With snakes in my brain

And coconuts filling my ears

I play your uke softly

Slither and slide that

Slimy sluggle.

Embracing it through my ears

Slimy dirty shlick shlop shlobadabloo

oUt HeRe I loathe my brain with all its beauty.

I understand what is

There are somethings in this world

That are not real

I can't believe this things anymore.

Pots and Pans dangle like a noose

It's all to0 crazy

OUt heRE

I have lost my small automobile

By the stars and shapes of whales

This life has no meaning anymore.

This squiggly red line doesn't help me

Author's Note

Bored Bored Bored

Reviews

[Cosmic kid]

You are wonderful with words

[eglantine]

I'd love to hear you read this out loud

[Whales]

We should totes Skype or something and i'll do that. but i know that weird to ask a stranger butt whatever i'm bored also keep in mind I've never read my work out loud before so ima be terrible. if you don't want to then that's fine i don't mind.

[eglantine]

haha no! I'd be up for that. I'm just at work and then meeting my mom for supper but later for sure!

[eglantine]

my skype name is ms.wordspinner

[Whales]

wordtastic when you see zipa300 added you that's me. also what time do you think you'll be on?

[Allycat]

Love this, it's different!
"with snakes in my brain
And coconuts in my ears"
Nice start
The ending is sad though :(

Ohhhhh and one more thing:
Do you mean these instead of this in the lines
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" I can't believe this things anymore"
Wonderful job