The One & Only....You Abuse

Roses wither as you slap her across the face,

Bouncing off the walls,

Sliding across floors,

Chairs,

Glass,

& hearts broken,

You erase her beauty with all your might,

...Slit her skin apart...

Didn't you say you loved her?

Then why are you hitting her?

Covered in makeup as she walks in,

Sunglasses worn,

I can't believe she's still alive,

How can she wait to die?

You love her,

Lying words spit in the air,

& I'm just sitting here,

How can she wait to die?

Reviews

[MagicAl]

Powerful read - managed to capture so much in such a little poem. Very good write.

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you. I greatly appreciate it.

[Innocent]

That poem is powerful and very emotive. Had me going , well done

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you.

[Simon Welsh]

Heart wrenching. Nice write, hon.

[Luna Zerimar]

Thanks Ell. (:

[Brook]

So emotive, and so powerful Such a wonderful write. I love it's message. You're a brilliant writer.

[Luna Zerimar]

Haha, I'm just an amateur, hun.

But thank you for the compliments, & thank you fro reading. (:

[dakarai]

WOW! Powerfully emotional piece. Real and raw

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you.

[Chloe_Spence]

This just popped up on my profile so I thought I would give it a read :)
Lots of emotion and a very strong message.
Keep your head up high :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Thank you. :)