Only In Dreams

Sometimes we drift into another world when we sleep where sub-conciously we would love to be...

 

Drifting where there is only beauty

Casting off the dayime duties

Eyes that are seeng beyond the daylight

Passing angels going about their duties

 

How beautiful it is up here

Passing cherubs with golden hair

Playing and laughing without any cares

It's just how I imagined heaven would be

 

Breathing in insence passing under my nose

Watching as others pass by whom I have known

Down there on earth where there is nothing but war

Only in dreams would such problems be solved

 

Sitting on clouds made from cotton wool

I study the way the shooting stars fall

Across the whole galaxy full of peace and tranquility

Only in dreams could this occur....

 

Reviews

[imm's place]

what a celestial dream so vivid and divine, thanks for sharing it, mary

[profile deleted]

Wow this is good Diane, sorry it has taken me forever to read this. I haven't been on here in a long time! It is good though. Take care and Be Blessed!!
Love Cheryl

[doreen cyr]

so beautiful diane
doreen

[starlight1]

Very beautifully penned Diane. I enjoyed your poem very much

[Fran Marie]

Across the whole galaxy full of peace and tranquility

Only in dreams could this occur....

Ah, this is so serene to think of while reading your lovely verse~ Very beautifuly
penned with great expression thru~out~ THanks for sharing this great piece of writing~
WEll DonE indeed!~Fran

[Helena]

Heavenly Diane. Oh if only reality could be like that, but alas we can
only dream and thank goodness we CAN escape the harsh
reality of this world if only at times. Beautiful poem! You hit the challenge
head on with this poem!

Hugs
Helena

[Tovli]

enjoyed the poem. very dream-like. tovli

[Samuel Dickens]

A nice little trip across dreamland--one of my favorite destinations! You've written a really good poem, Diane. Sam

[angelinmypocket]

Yes...you are right Diane. Sometimes we do drift into other worlds where we would rather be. Dreams are only one way of escaping reality, and sooner or later we have to come back to earth. It's always a jolt to wake from a beautiful dream where we can feel so much happiness...and your dream is no exception. it's a beautiful place to be. You employeed the phrase very beautifully, just like it was your's to begin with. Thank you so much Diane, for helping to keep the dream alive.
Love...Liz

[WordMaster]

This starts out wonderfully �But the ending is somewhat off � it just leaves me hanging.

Sorry�

Looking forward to your next dream