The Storm

 

 

The Lightening,

It lights up the sky,

 

The Thunder,

Creates sound,

 

And The Rain,

Tapping on the window,

Brings together these two raging forces,

 To create,

The storm

 

Reviews

[Raj]

Stretch it, Lexy...

You had the flow... you could do more on this. What you have is good, but you can extend it to may be compare life or i dont know. You are the creator. Why dont you give it a try.

Hey, but it doesnt take anything out of this piece though. Short and very much to the point. Nice:) I liked it.

[Arsenic]

Short sweet and to the point. I can actually see the storm.

[Pakino]

Super Simple. Really nice

[Lexy]

Creative and short. The way you wrote it makes able to picture what's happening.

[Vonnette]

I like this. Uncomplicated and straightforward.