Isolation

When winter screams with winds of rage,

 

When leaves are burried in an icy grave,

 

The warmth of my soul extracted,

 

The pain of my heart compacted.

 

 

My thoughts are blurred,

 

So i can see,

 

There,

 

In the shadows of my mind,

 

I'll find,

 

Isolation

Reviews

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A truly beautiful and descriptive write. Excellent word choice. Alot said in few words. Nice job.

[Arsenic]

I like this. You use imagery in a way that I both enjoy reading and love visualizing. I really like the lines:

"The warmth of my soul extracted,The pain of my heart compacted."

Great great lines.

[Kyle]

HI RYAN!!! ITS KYLE!!! LEXY INTRODUCED ME TO THIS PLACE! I ALREADY READ UR POEM ISOLATION AND I THINK ITS SUPER-DOOPER "REALLY" I DO MEAN THAT!!!!!! THE IMAGERY AND FEELING YOU ACCENTUATE THROUGH YOUR WRITING IS REALLY WELL THOUGHT OUT!!

[Azalee Schmetterling]

Very well done in such few lines. Short and impactful. Just wondering if the 3rd to last line is supposed to read; "in the shadows of my mind"... when I read it the first time I read it with "mind" on accident. You may want to read this out loud to yourself or have someone read it to you and see what you think. Also you have beautiful imagery. I loved the first two lines the most.

[Lexy]

I have to tell you, in a GOOD WAY, you remind me of one of my least favorite authors. You have good imagery words. If only everyone had that