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                 I'm in a trance.

               I'm lost in my mind.

               Im thinking of words,

              I'm not likely to find.

 

                   I sit here.

                    I ponder.

                I wonder if you're

                 Growing fonder.

 

               You're next to me.

             Your head leans on me.

                You grab my arm,

               but do you love me.

               

Reviews

[mick weller]

ah ah - time will tell ...
lot of `I's n `me`s in this... but I think you make it work
`Im thinking of words,
I'm not likely to find.`
-this needs a kind of double take though... crazy!