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Sitting there,

lifeless,

Gazing at the horizon,

The sight of the sun-kissed grass,

Glistening

Laying there,

Entranced,

Staring at the starry sky,

The gentle breath of the wind,

Cooling

 

Waking there,

Dazed,

Squinting though the morning fog,

The soft light of dawn,

Living

Reviews

[Lexy]

This has an awesome rhythm going, love it!

[Kyle]

this poem contains some really great imagery, i love how you wrote "The sight of the sun-kissed grass,
Glistening"....wonderful usage of vocabulary! your writing seems to improve each time i read it :)

excellent work, keep writing!

kyle