Secret

Wait just a second.

Before this moment is gone,

you need to know that...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...even the poem is a secret...i like how you left the reader hanging at the end with the ellipsis ......

[Alex]

Brilliant, a cliff hanger... I'm left wanting more! Such power in so few words.

[willweb]

...............okay, now what? Just kidding. This one definitely made me think.

[WhiteWillow]

Then my work here is done (with this one piece, anyway).

[J]

wait! wait!

masterful. i had a thought of being on a ferris wheel and one side of the bucket having a monumental failure .... grab my hand!! oooops

[Solitary_Streets]

This is a great haiku. the structure is perfect, and is simple but thought provoking. I love haikus like old kerouac and beat poets did back in the day. They were great and so is this one.

[WhiteWillow]

Thank you, SS, for your kind words