Falling

Floating through the air

white fleck pillows down to rest

among fallen stars

Reviews

[willweb]

This was beautifully penned. Soft and touching.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful haiku...

such an nice image...

[MsJewel]

There is soft serenity to your words...absolutely lovely!

:) Julie

[J]

oooooo i could nevva master the art of so little saying more than the mind could assimilate without repeat 'n repeat .......

what a profundity of complete joy and mind beauty you have created for me [and everyone]. when i wish i had written this, you k.n.o.w. it is exquisite. into library it goes so i can access even if you take another break! xx