Confused State of Mind

This has a deeper meaning than I could put in words.

Silence

I am silent

Everyone in the room is

Silent.

 

Keeping to myself

Hiding in the shadows

I am not being true to myself

I am not.

 

People beg me

People tell me

I do not accept it

I am not.

 

I know in my heart

I am not

I am the other

Not true.

 

I am not pure

I am not mixed

I am one

I am the outcast

 

No one knows

I do not know

I just have a feeling

I just am.

Author's Note

I was trying to a mysterious edge...was it?

Reviews

[Marina]

I loved this.
And, there is indeed, a mysterious edge.
(lawl)

::]

-Reeeenie

[Last Lying Look]

I really liked this. And yes I think you did give it that mysterious edge.
I think I know what you were trying to get across with tihs and I think you did an excellent job.
Loved it! :)