Maiden Oddity

Often perplexing, ever so charming... I write this for the motley female form...

Why, I wonder
 is your smile so genuine?

Why does it make
 my life so sanguine?

Is it because
 your attitude’s so prime…

Or is it that aura
 that is so perfectly divine…

Your wit, for one,
 is incessantly vulpine…

Your face,
 a patronus to thoughts repline…

You expressions,
 so mesmerising, delectable and fine…

That makes even a gobbledegook
 forget and miss a line…

To the almighty, I pray,
 that you ascend heights alpine…

And I trust you’ll remember me,
 in all troubles of thine…

Author's Note

One of my earlier poems...
Sharing it for reviews...
:)

Reviews

[Sakshi]

another beauty..
if i had to describe this in just one word, it would be, marvelous..
smooth flow, easy on the eyes to read, soothing words which leaves a long impression.

[Wikiwit]

Thank You...:)

[Shadow Kat]

Amazing emotions that I felt the whole time I was reading, I like the flow of it. The meaning hit home. Thanks for sharing this. :)

[Wikiwit]

My Pleasure...:)

[sierrasparks91]

Really good and i get the meaning of this. keep up the work

[Wikiwit]

I will...:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Great use of words. I had to read again. Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. Good to remember people and we hope they will remember us. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Wikiwit]

Thank you for the encouraging words...
:)