No Snow

No Snow

 

Here it never snows

I Have never seen snow

Here there is

No snow

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Here it never snows

at christmas time down here its

SUMMER

i would love to see the snow

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Here it never snows

i have only seen snow on the T.V

one day i would love to go to the snow

Just one day

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Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

The repetition works nicely with this piece, the longing sorta leaping of the page

[A]

I would love to go to the snow too :) Where I live it's winter during Christmas but never gets cold enough to snow. I really like this poem because it is relateable...I know how you feel. I'm sure one day you will get to see the snow :) Great poem!

[biggle]

this is the number one reason, why i have plans to move to arustralia as soon as i graduated college.
i'll bring a big cooler of snow for you =]

[Hollywood]

I could understand to be so anxious about possibly having snow.
Belive me, your not missing anything. :]
Nice poem though.

[Aradie Rain]

If you ever do get the chance, go snowboarding, its wet cold and you get the whole expiriance. I grew up around snow, snow higher than my head and still going to school as a kid. I miss it now.
~Araide

[cheeeeese]

You certainly got the point across that it definitely doesn't snow where you are :P But I definitely understand the feeling that you are going through because I too am in the same situation, although i've seen snow where I used to live. I think this described that very feeling wonderfully, great job on this piece :)