Permission To Fly

Insperation From a song

Permission to Fly

 

I want to fly one day

Go live my dream

For at least a while

But I want

Your Permission To

Fly

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I want to live my life

I want to fly on my own

I don’t need your help any more

I would like to fly on my own

But do I have your Permission to

FLY

Author's Note

Comments?????

Reviews

[Lou Evans]

It's interesting. I want to know who're you are asking permission to fly? But it's perfect that you never say it in the poem. As a reader, you have caused curisoity, which is great. It was a nice little poem. Although, this is just person...it annoys me when people change the font and color. It's nothing important but just a comment I feel the need to make. Other than that, i twas a great little poem. :)

[Wicahpi]

Wouldn't it be great to just take flight without any one's permission?
I miss my flying dreams where I could do just that.

I'm finding you like repitition .. I'm thinking you could venture out, just a bit,
away from your comfort zone! Take flight!!

[Yani De Los Reyes]

I like this! Good job! :D