What have I been told?

I see the world after myself,
The burdens of time,
The questions of others,
Attach themselves before my enjoyment,
Hazy but not opaque,
To see the veil,
It cautiously lifts.

Reviews

[Ink]

The usage of the capitalization, but ending each line with a comma seems a bit strange to me... but I'm not one to make a big deal of formatting, that's a part of our voice..

Not quite sure I followed you on that "enjoyment" line, but the rest was quite solid. Looking forward to reading more :)

[WildRed]

Thanks man :) it is what it is you know, its how it came out as I was typing. I really dont know much about poetry, I just write.

[Esha Chakravarty]

well written..