A Legend

That, which among men, may fall..

Dangerous

like a storm

Swirl and weave

leave no path

 

Dangerous

like a dark cloud

Rain black tears

nothing left

 

Dangerous

like a fire

Burn without knowledge

legends never die

 

Dangerous

like an angry wind

Nothing comes now to

tell of your glory

 

Dangerous

like a roaring, churning river

Break the barriers

weep above all

 

Dangerous

for I love you

Author's Note

All of my poetry comes from the heart.

Reviews

[Odayin]

This one brings the meaning of "dangerous" to the light. You perfectly describe well-known meanings of the word and put them in a style to easily say your point. Excellent job.
However, you then hit the reader with a cut-off style shift and break the rhythm, almost shocking the reader. This works well because the meaning is shocking as well. Afterall, who would have ever thought that love for someone could be dangerous...
Excellent job...as usual. Great work

[Wild Willow Blue]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had great fun writing this piece.