10 O'clock on a Sunday Morning

Please believe that it is not your fault..

Why do men hate

to make others feel worthless

to tell them they don’t matter

anymore

they never did

I should have told you

I should have been there

It feels like the bruises from your hand

are on my heart

instead of my face

instead of my arms

the ones that will never hold you again

I should have picked you up

when you fell

I should have lifted you to the sky

when you slammed that door

Author's Note

All of my poetry comes from the heart.

Reviews

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Wow, this is a such a powerful piece of heartfelt poetry. I love the emotion shown. 10/10 :)

[Wild Willow Blue]

Thank you, MD. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Yw. Thanks for sharing :)

[Voncloud]

this is cool, the portrayal of emotions is good, the poem structure further emphasizes your emotions. keep writing. =D

[eglantine]

very interesting. reminds me of that term, which I can't think of right now, but where the prisoner or kidnapee grows fond and even protective of the kidnaper.

[Mackenzie Brooke]

I can relate to the emotions you put on display here. Well done!

[Dean Kuch®]

Powerfully...moving. Very thought provoking write. I'm STILL thinking about it!

[K-mo]

this is a good poem, well done