Our Moment

Something conquers everything in all of us..

I want to exact revenge on you

I want to be the poor one you turn to

Look into my eyes now and hush

For I’ll be the one to bring you

                Home

 

I’ll be the one to create peace upon

                These lies

These ships of tears in your eyes

They hurt me with spikes of your pleasure

 

Your treasure strikes

Author's Note

All of my poetry comes from the heart.

Reviews

[Acer]

I’ll be the one to create peace upon
These lies

These ships of tears in your eyes.......

lovely lines, well written once again. loved it indeed, new light came by your writing.

[Wild Willow Blue]

Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Acer]

My pleasure :*)

[Acer]

Always love to read your way too.

[Kianna L. Bearden]

You are really good at writing! Keep it up, cannot wait to read more.

[Wild Willow Blue]

Thank you so much! You are very kind.

[nigrum homonculus]

in such a small space, you said so much. really good! well done!

[OctoberDawn]

Your words speak to me in less lines than a novel could. Thank you!

[Charlotte Haran]

A very well and truthfully written poem. A good play on words, and even though it is short, it is powerfull.

[The Jay]

Distorted, and mesmerizing. There's a lot of room in it for expansion, I feel though.