An Evening in Roma

A very special evening

An Evening in Roma

We sat across the restaurant table

And I looked into your eyes

Your body began to tremble

When my hand moved to your thigh

'I’ve got a special question Darling'

I whispered in your ear

'You know how much I love you'

'and how I hold you dear'

'Yes Yes!' you sighed so eager

'I’m ready to say I will'

Those were the words I wanted

' Oh good, then here's the bill'

A poem by Will Neill.

Author's Note

I got a bit bored with all the serious short story writing today so I wrote this purely for fun--its most likely rubbish, but I don't care

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

Haha...It is definately not rubbish... this is adorable... made me gush and made me laugh out loud too..

YB

[Will Neill]

YB, Thank you for your review.
Will

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome Will... :O)

[Dean]

The element of surprise is most often very effective. You handle this one nicely, here.

[Will Neill]

Dean, thank you-I just did this on a whim, I'm more of a story teller than a poet. I wiil stop over and read some of you work.
Take care
Will

[SyberRose]

This is funny Will ha...maybe down deep you are tired of paying the bills haa...and want someone else to pay them...cute one...Rose:)

[Will Neill]

Thanks Rose, Just a bit of fun.
Take Care.
Will

[Sami Khalil]

This one puts a smile on faces . So whimsical...:)

[Will Neill]

Sami, you are so kind. I hope you smile for the rest of the day.
Will

[Sami Khalil]

You too friend...You are welcome...:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

It delivered a smile! Hope all is well in your world, Will!

My best,
Kelly

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A wit of a write... a clever scheme to give the bill to the significant other... go Dutch less of a headache... and not stringing the question of wedding bells... except you wrote this out of boredom... amusing I must say...

[Southern Cross]

Oh how adorable..Love those "surprise" endings.

[Will Neill]

thank you kindly.
Will

[Sarah Jean]

Haha, I enjoyed this one, very well done.

[Shane Mohamed]

I believe that one's best works are developed when they're seriously focused and determined or if feeling lively and when free from pressure. You perform well in both cases.

[Will Neill]

Thanks Shane, You know how it is.
Will

[Shane Mohamed]

Well, there is a comedian in you my dear friend. There is no way that's a girlfriend. It's most likely his wife. You're a rare combination Will.