Who Can Love...

No one can love,

A girl,

With cuts and scrapes,

On her arms and legs,

So much self-hatred,

Too many scars,

Down in the dumps,

Depressed,

Skips lunch and dinner,

Has anxiety,

Shy and quiet,

Always angry,

Self conscious,

Obsesses over death,

Killing,

Suicide,

Who can love a girl,

With scars,

On the inside,

And out?

Author's Note

I made this on the spot. Hope you liked it. Leave suggestions and tips for my writing. Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[Riley Bray]

This sounds like a description of my best friend. I honestly think you must be spying on my life. xD This was a really good write to, totally your element.

[Savior of Time]

Lol, trust me, I'm not. I've living my long road and it just so happens to be like yours :P Thanks, by the way. My life reflects my writing. I write waht happens in my life and this is what happens. I self-harm.

-Willa

[Riley Bray]

I used to too. If you want to try and get out of that talk to the guru. :P In all seriousness though, if you want help I'm willing.

[Savior of Time]

Yeah, maybe it'd help. Thanks. I would love your help.

[Riley Bray]

Alright. How about we chat in pms then?

[Savior of Time]

Yeah, sure.

[PoetessZero]

Hey i proud of you for posting such intimate poerty and being a role model for other people going through inner warfare (the worst kind of warfare)n

[Savior of Time]

thank you

[Phillitup]

Who can't when that person is just like you?

[Savior of Time]

Not exactly like me...

[Savior of Time]

Here, lemme rephrase that: we are all different, just like snowflakes; but there's always something different, even if you can't see it.

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Expresses a lot of emotion and it's pretty deep :)
Message me any time if you want to talk :)

[Savior of Time]

Thanks; that means a lot. I'll be sure to if I need it.