Blades

The relief is killer..

I feel a sense of relief,

As the blade cuts my skin,

Allowing the blood to ooze out,

Letting the life drain out of my body,

I cannot tell you how amazing the feel is,

I can only say that it makes me feel better,

Hopefully I will be able to stop this madness,

For it is literally killing and eating me on the inside,

And it is tearing my fragile flesh on the out,

I pray that I really can stop this pain,

That i purposely give to myself,

For it is also hurting others,

Because they really care,

About my insane life,

And about me

Author's Note

Spur when I saw my scars. Hope y'all liked it, even if it's completely emo. Leave tips/suggestions and review this please! Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[Abby]

This is something that is definitely a deeper pain than what some would realize. I hope this isn't going on, because it's a hard thing to have to deal with. It's a great write, though, and you've done a great job with writing it.

Great job, Willa. :)

Abby :)

[Savior of Time]

Thank you. I regret to inform you that it is.. The longest I've gone without it is two months. Thank you for the review.
-Willa

[Abby]

Well, everyone has their weaknesses. You just have this, and hopefully you'll be able to stop soon. :) I believe in you, and that you can. :)

[Savior of Time]

I hope I do, too; as do many of my friends, especially my best friends Cameron and Philby.

[Abby]

I can understand that. :) I hope that this is something that can stop soon, and maybe someone can help you get through this, and you can get better. I understand where you're coming from, though. :)

[Savior of Time]

Me too

[Blue Belle]

I like your poem. I agree with not being able to explain how good it feels. I think the structure is interesting in that is seems "sharp." Take Care! Stay Strong! :)

[Savior of Time]

Thanks Blue Belle!

-Willa

[CreativeStroke]

A lot of people struggle with cutting and it pains me that people feel the need to do it. I really hope you can stop, because it does hurt others that care about you and want to see you happy and full of life.
The write was beautifully done. I enjoyed the format you wrote it in.

[Savior of Time]

Thank you. I do too, as do my best friends Cameron and Philby. I wish I never started, sometimes, and other times I just want to keep cutting... thank you for the kind words.