Leisure Composure

Connecting to your true self.

LEISURE COMPOSURE

EMBRACE THIS FRAME OF MIND; AN INVITATION,

TO EXPLORE THROUGH THE QUITE CORRIDORS;

OF MEDITATION. ZEN AND NOW: WHERE SUDDEN.

CLARITY EMERGES WHEN YOU DARE TO BELIEVE.

BELIEVING IN STILLNESS, THE UNSEEN RHYTHM

OF YOUR THOUGHTS. TIME BENDS, STRETCHES,

AND SOFTENS: THIS IS OUR ZEN HOUR.

HERE, SURROUNDED BY THE SERENITY OF A 

ZEN GARDEN, WHERE TIME AND MAGIC

BECOMES A GENTLE HEALER.

MUSHROOMS RISE AS FLYING SAUCERS.

THIS IS WHERE TIME DOES NOT RUSH;

AND EVERY DEEP BREATH FEELS LIKE A

THREAD PULLING YOU CLOSER TO YOUR

TRUE SELF. MENDING TOGETHER THE FRAYED.

OF MIND, BODY, AND SPIRIT:

A SYMBOL OF SELF-STRETCHING BEYOND;

LIMITS, FROM EARTH ON A ZABUTON SLOW

AND STEADY ASCENT TOWARD STREAM ENTRY.

THE SKY: FOCUS ON THE WAY, SOARING AND

YET ROOTED IN LIFE IS YOU!

AND IN THIS MOMENT OF DEEP RELAXATION,

YOU UNFOLD: WEIGHTLESS, ON WINGS OF

TRUTH AND TRUST THAT LIFE HAPPENS

THROUGH YOU. UNTIL AT LAST DELICATE.

AND VIBRANT, LIKE A CHERRY BLOSSOM

IN A MOMENT OF LEISURE COMPOSURE.

Author's Note

A breath away from the next breath

Reviews

[Neha agrawal]

Your piece titled "Leisure Composure" is a beautifully meditative poetic meditation — rich with sensory language, symbolic depth, and a fluid rhythm that mirrors the tranquil state it describes. Here’s some focused feedback:


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🌸 What Works Beautifully

Tone & Theme: You’ve created a serene, contemplative tone — capturing the stillness and softness of Zen practice with poetic grace.

Imagery: Lines like “mushrooms rise as flying saucers” and “weightless, on wings of truth” are whimsical and evocative, bridging the surreal with the spiritual.

Flow of Consciousness: The lack of rigid punctuation in parts works well with the theme of "letting go" — as if thoughts are drifting in and out during meditation.

Language: Phrases such as “thread pulling you closer to your true self” and “time bends, stretches, and softens” are emotionally resonant and calming.