Chinese Girl in the Library

snapshot from the library

Chinese girl in the library

 

whenn I blew that kiss at you just now, the

chinese girl between us just

looked at me really awkwardly, i

think she thought i

blew it at her

how easily

honest expressions,

become creapy.

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Honest expressions becoming creepy......well put! I love poetry taking every day events and turning it into something special......sometimes in the mundane things of life, we stumble over little gems of interpersonal action.......:)

[Ariana Omnomnom]

I just noticed one spelling error at the end.
creepy*

But it's a cute and funny poem.

[William Arthur]

also 'whenn' the first word but i left them in because they conveyed the hurry ion which i wrote the message on fb chat

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Oh lol ;P
Makes sense then, it was sentimental

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Maybe explain that in the notes, otherwise some more people might note it