Midnight Rambles

I couldn't sleep...

I am torn 
Torn between a life that is 
and a life that could be 
 
I am alone 
Alone yet accompanied 
distant, though you can't tell 
 
I am silent 
Silent yet screaming, 
apologies you'll never hear 
 
I am sorry 
Sorry for my mistakes, 
the pain I see in your eyes 
 
I am confused 
Confused by the options 
given in my fragile state 
 
I am hurt 
Hurt by myself 
and the secrets I hold 
 
I am tired 
Tired of pretending, 
wearing a mask of porcelain 
 
I am done 
Done with my mind 
always dragging me down 
 
I am afraid 
Afraid of myself,  
and where everything is going 
 
I am realizing 
Realizing that this 
will never be over.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this quickly, and I know it needs work. All suggestions are appreciated!!

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An incredible message that parlays into the judgment of others, nothing needs to be changed within image and flow, maybe flesh out the wording a tad, just ot hammer home some points, otherwise, very well written, good job.

[Emunah June.]

No need to change a thing. This was breathtaking as it'self. :)

[Jewels]

This poem relates so well to how I feel right now in life. You have no idea.
I think for just writing this quickly is was really good :)