Broken thoughts

It was of the finest of threads

Woven through silver lined clouds

A tiny strand of perfect affection

Connecting each star to another

Spun of memories past and future

Stitched together by love

An endless union between two hearts

Tied tightly by delicate desires

Double knotted in cherished moments

Which I thought would never break…

Reviews

[Tawnya Drain]

Wonderful. Quite beautiful.

[willweb]

Thank you so much Tawnya. I am happy you liked this one.

[s y e]

I really loved this one Will, I really think you've outdone yourself with this one and it's going into my favourites!

[willweb]

Thank you so much for your nice omments Noodlehead. And thank you for putting this in your favorites.

[Cryingkate]

Oh My I see this imagery so well.
I think we had the same vision.
somewhere in my collections I wrote one with very similar images.
I titled it " Days of Light" I'm sure you'd love it as I do yours.

You know though... I see Broken Thoughts as thoughts coming from a real place and time.
But I also see that perhaps Nothing is really broken.
Perhaps on some celestial shores that Love still shimmers in the light.
Perhaps on this earthly plane the connection of what is was and will be was only temporarily or appearance of separation because that is required for the two to get thier job done that they were here to do.
Perhaps the short lived togetherness in the here and now was to strengthen the Soul into knowing there is,was and will be that eternal connection after the Job is done.

Nothing that Beautifully created could really possibly fail. There must surely be the place time for it to flourish and be.
Even the plants die off when winter comes, Yet come the spring, they are reborn by roots and even more bountiful by seed.
There is the time and place for everything under the Sun. Hold on to what you have and never let go.
What will be will be again.

Thank you for sharing this Beautiful Story thru poem form :-)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Cryingkate for your wonderful and inspiring comments today. Sometimes these feelings are hard to mend, but reading your comments sure does help. It does seem from your review that you have either experienced this before or have helped someone who has. Thank you again.

[Cryingkate]

Awe Thanks so much... I have an enormous to do list today that can only be done on a working business day and we have this possibly one time till August as we had a surprise day off from work to get this done. But I just had to write you. I feel deeply into your poem, with a knowing you see with insight and with insight I had to let you know that "All Is well" You will see in time and I needed to remind you to hold on and see the Beauty in it all.
My eyes are tearful with Joy knowing your heart received the message and will work on it.

Ever hear that song " It Is Well With My Soul" ? well this is a good time to keep singing it :-)

I gotta go for now but will be back and I can't wait to read more of your Treasure Pieces.

and Yes.... Trust your guts, You are very, gifted with insight :-)

[John Anderson]

Simple language with powerful imagery.

[willweb]

Thank you so much John for reading and commenting today.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

seriously sad ending to such a hopeful piece...nicely stitched together by your words.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Jacob.

[ms. barrie]

This is amazing in its unique celestial, poignant imagery...
Very well crafted and pleasing rhyme...beautiful poem.
Thank you for sharing! :)

[willweb]

Thank you Barrie Joy for your comments on my poem. I am happy this one touched you.

[David Scott]

Things break ...
It seems almost everything does in this life.
Now, even our thoughts seem to break...
Yet, it is lovely before it gets broken as you show so well.

[willweb]

Thank you so much David for you nice comments on my poem. It does seem like they break more now than ever. I am glad you liked this one.

[Matching Socks]

This is definitely going in with my favourites.
I always enjoy visiting your poems.

[willweb]

Ance, thank you for reading my poems. Thank you for adding this to your favorites. Thank you for always being so nice.

[Matching Socks]

Your poems are lovely and you are deserving of the recognition

And I'm not always nice. :) Some might say I'm a mean a*s b***h...
You get what you give.

[willweb]

Then I guess since I am not a mean a*s b***h I don't have to worry about it coming back to me. :)

[Matching Socks]

Damn, you really are smarter than you look...
: ]

[Matching Socks]

Sorry.., smartassedness does not hold the same prejudice.

[willweb]

That almost rhymes.

[Matching Socks]

Well Duh. I'm a fricking poet.
I'm not just here for comedy relief...
:]

[willweb]

That's funny...wait, no its not. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww this is so pretty and sweet.Into my favorites for sure Will :)

[willweb]

Thank you so very, very much Vidya for reading my poetry. It is so nice that you take the time to do so. You make me feel welcomed here.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are so welcome here its like you've always been here:)