Somewhere between heaven and twilight (A collaboration with Kalypso)

High within the illuminated sky,

a silver midnight sun....

it seemed like a darker day

found a brighter night,

somewhere between heaven and twilight

 

Majestic oaks in silhouette

and shadows paint the earth,

alive within lemonade shimmers

a' glow of promised beauty,

as the stars sleep...dreaming

 

Author's Note

Thank you Kalypso for allowing me to post this poem.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

A very nice seamless collaboration. I actually find collaborations really hard, I guess I am a bit of a control freak. I did one with Red when she was in a slump. I think a collaboration is good when you can't tell who is who, as is the case for me here.

[willweb]

Thank you so much KLGoode. I am glad you enjoyed our poem. It was easy writing with Kalypso and fun.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Thanks KL, yeah this was a complete spontaneous piece that was all Will's creative crafting, which makes it all the more fun. So appreciative of you stopping by and reading. :)

[The Quill]

nice composition, beautiful

[willweb]

Thank you so very much.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Thank you so much Abhi, for stopping by and reading this. Many thanks yous!! :)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Beautiful writing Kalypso and Wil!

[willweb]

Thank you for your comments. Kalypso inspired this poem today with her beautiful words.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Thank you Anne for reading, this was all Will, stringing some words together to make a beautiful poem. He is the creative genius here.

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful poem with tremendous imagery...Bravo.................

[willweb]

Thank you Sami for your comments on our poem.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)....................

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Thanks Sami for reading! Love to see your thoughts on this... :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)...

[Ghost of Jupiter]

You are quite welcome, I still love this line "alive within lemonade shimmers" Absolutely beautiful work Will. I feel honored that my words sparked this creative gem. In my library it goes..haha. :P

[willweb]

Thank you again my friend for your wonderful words. I think it turned out beautiful.

[Matching Socks]

One thumb up for each of you. :)

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Ance. It was fun to write.

[Matching Socks]

You guys did it wonderfully! I'm a big fan of both of you. :)

[willweb]

Kalypso was so much fun to write with. She inspired this piece

[Matching Socks]

Love it when that happens !!

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Oh Will is being shy, he is the one that weaved some of my words together Ance, all the credit goes to him. Thank you for commenting! :)

[Matching Socks]

The words are as important as the inspiration. Don't sell your self short.
Anyhow, I enjoy reading both of you. :)
Enjoy your weekend.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Thanks Ance, your words mean a lot. Also happy you liked this. YOU have a awesome weekend yourself. :D