Low tide

The tide slips out

and the sand becomes part of time

Sifting moments into memories

scattered along a shore

of neglected feelings,

disappearing on the dampened outline

of life

 

Reviews

[Cory Barrett]

Will, this is beautiful! One of my favorites in a while. I am jealous of this one. Really great job

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Streamline. I am floored by this review. Thank you again.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful metaphor...especially "the dampened outline of life" reminds me of all the tears shed by those who feel neglected and unloved.

jacob

[willweb]

Thank you Jacob for your nice comments.